My Story

lakerzz8 · Post by **lakerzz8** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:14 am

So I don't know if any of you heard the site associatedcontent, but I got my story published on there so if you could check it out and tell me what you think, I'd appreciate it.

http://www.associatedcontent.com/articl ... tml?cat=44

Post by **dosraider** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 5:37 am

'My' story? It seems you had a bad day.....

Pretty good.

Santhosh CHRiS · Post by **Santhosh CHRiS** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:27 am

Nice story and really realistic... like it could happen to anyone.

Love your style too. It uses simple direct narration of what's happening instead of complicating it with trivial descriptions and details.

Overall very good. Make hard copies of all your stories sometime... so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.

I finished half the entire Lord of the Rings Trilogy in there once lol

Post by **Dogbreath** » Sat Jun 13, 2009 12:06 am

so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.

Is that where you take your pictures of lakerzz8 too?

lakerzz8 · Post by **lakerzz8** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 4:19 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB

Santhosh CHRiS · Post by **Santhosh CHRiS** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:23 am

lakerzz8 wrote:Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB

Ha ha ha ha... OWNED!!!